Ali @ Elm Park School
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Friday, 24 October 2014
Thursday, 25 September 2014
Wednesday, 24 September 2014
Peace Sense Poem
I am learning to write a Poem about Peace One Day using my senses.
I am so proud of being able to make my work more colourful and vivid.
It can be tricky to find descriptive and interesting words to use in my sentences.
My Teacher can help me by checking my work and giving me feedback.
The next step for me in my learning is to write another Peace Poem.
Tuesday, 23 September 2014
Pitch Black
Pitch Black
It was 2:30am. It was pitch black, I was crammed on the back of the landing boats outside of Z beach waiting for our turn to land.
I was holding my gun like it was my life. I was paralyzed with fear.
Suddenly out of the dark a massive blinding flash lit up the whole sky.
The Turkish have spotted us. I was shocked. Immediately the Turkish began shooting.
I ducked down. The killing bullets flew over my head.
There were soldiers dying all around me brains were exploding. It was a bloodbath of death. All my nightmares had come true. We were commanded to leave the boat. I could smell fear all through the rowing boat
Here we go again into the pitch black……
By Ali

Reflection I am learning to write an interesting recount.I am so proud of making my recount interesting by using similes and adjectives.It can be tricky to the right adjectives for the right sentence.My buddy can help me by checking my work.The next step for me in my learning is to write an even better recount.
Ukulele Video
We have been learning to play the Ukulele with Mrs Talijaard.
Percentages & Fractions Problem
Problem Solving Task
I am learning to solve problems by using my understanding of the equivalence between percentages and fractions.
50% of 30
half of 30=15
20% 0f 15
⅕ of 15
15 divided by 5=3
15-3=12
Percentages and Fractions Reflection
I am learning to solve problems by using my understanding of the equivalence between percentages and fractions.
I am so proud of being able to convert percentages to fractions.
It can be tricky to work out the answer.
My buddy can help me by checking my work to see if it is wrong or right.
The next step for me in my learning is to do a Stage 7 question by myself.
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